|Reviews for Incision and Drainage|
| Saniaaa chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
only saw this today! i'm glad you decided to change the plot of the story. whilst i really wanted them to get married, i think the first time would have included too many issues without them understanding what effect the separation had on them.
still liked seeing this though.
| OneLastEndeavor chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
This was a well-written piece. You've created some dynamic characters here and the fight was very believable. Though, I have to say that it ended quite abruptly...something I didn't expect a one-shot would do. I realize that this is tied to your other story (which I haven't read) but the abrupt ending makes me inclined to think that this can't stand alone, since there's no resolution at the end.
Other than that, it was a good read. It also kind of made me want eggs. Nice job! :)
| Kajal chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I guess I'm glad you changed the story and had them not get married married the first time around. In the real story, they still have lots of issues to work through, but at least they've both of aware of what those issues are. I feel they are ready to get over the past and their respective insecurities (or will be soon enough), and as bad as their relationship has been so far, their marriage wont be tainted by everything that's happened. By having them not get married the first time around, I think you helped Rey realize she really doesn't want away from Hassan. If she hadn't gotten her independent time, she would not have realized that her issues are her own and running away isn't going to solve them. So like I said, I'm glad you addressed a lot of the issues before they got married married. Of course, now I'm ready for them to have "the talk" and learn how to move on.
On a completely separate note, how odd is it that I found angry Hassan to be a little attractive? It's really only because I know him to be a levelheaded and calm person in general; if he was like this all the time, I'd detest him. Also, he finally acted on what I've been feeling this whole time (though I've been wanting to throw the plates AT Rey...) However, I respect the sometimes frustrated but mostly understanding Hassan from the current PPC better then the one who (apparently attractively) blow up in this one.
I'm sick and so was having the hardest time concentrating in class today. Then I found that this was up and stopped taking notes altogether... It's probably going to make acing my classes a little more challenging, but KEEP POSTINGS! )))
| madkatter chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Ah I miss the cheeky goofy Hassan, but I guess married life isn't just about fun
| absinthe21 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Beautiful. Felt like I was in the kitchen, watching them.