Reviews for A Little Too Late
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Hmmm I don't really understand some parts. But you've got a nice beginning! Try to make the words flow a little more. I loooooove the plot though! I can't wait to read the next chapter...hope the main character ends up okay.
Miryo chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
A little strange in the way it was sparsely and hastily written, but overall a nice story with a nice meaning. Great work.