Reviews for I Love that Thrill
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Hey

I liked your story - well written and conveyed all the right creepyness that I imagine a serial killer would exude. Only pointer I'd give is despite it being in first person you seem to use "I" a lot. Like, maybe you could put, "I am a user, addicted to the high that killing brings me. Started off small back when I was an amateur, but now I have expertise." Just re-arrange a few sentences so it doesn't seem to constantly be I did this, I felt that etc, just a tip. Don't mean to offend just figured I'd point it out :) But whatever, your story was awesome. Creepy, but awesome.

If you have the time, please review my "No Escape" short story as found : u/799342/

Thanks a lot :) Take Care