|Reviews for september and sinking|
| cassi crysta chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
ooooh creepy and pretty. I like the last bit...it's so random-bit-of-life.
| Ohio-lovers chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
aww I wish it was longer *pout*
| classic violet chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
This is absolutely stunning, I love the diction in this, I love everything about the poem, I love the imagery, everything, you are truly talented.
| thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
i adore the imagery in this.. evocative and vivid.. write on!
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
This is haunting. Some great images. My only criticism is the phrasing of the last stanza, though I can see why you phrased it how you did. I'd just prefer to see "she picks her teeth" as the first part of the stanza. But I love "more papercut than pulse" and "cemetery season." Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)