Reviews for Fated
J.J. LaRoux chapter 12 . 7/26/2012
Beautiful ending to the story! I'm sad it ended so quickly though, but it was amazing all the same! :D
Raya47 chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
sailorsweetart chapter 12 . 7/18/2012
Well, dawww, if that wasn't one of the cutest things I've ever read, I don't know what is!

You are very welcome for reading your most wonderful story. It was fantastic! I really enjoyed the 'prophecy' coming true and everything falling into place.

Great job! I'll definetly re-read this one :)
XxInfiniteLoverxX chapter 10 . 3/23/2012
Pls update love it (I know its short)
Embarrassed chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
It seems good so far, the cliffhanger at the end definitely serves as a nice hook for readers.

Technical stuff

These are probably redundant, since i'm sure someone has said all of this before, but none-the-less I'll toss my two cents in.

This isn't really technical, but I might toss something else in, besides Judy's tone of voice for the reader to really be able to buy into that she's truly as witchy as Felicity thinks she is, although her job may just be enough to convince us of that by itself :P

[ Considering she had to get up at five thirty in the morning, check to make sure she had everything packed, drive for an hour to airport, have a lecture from her mother about there being strange people in the world, how she could get kidnapped.] This seems like a fragment, but it's a quick fix

Hope to read more soon

J.J. LaRoux chapter 10 . 2/27/2012
Yay! Another update! Oh I hope they just realize thee feelings for each soon! The suspense is killing me! ;D Update again soon!
gryff101 chapter 10 . 2/26/2012
I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THAT YOU UPLOADED A NEW CHAPTER! I was getting to wonder when you would upload another chapter... I LOVED the chapter! I loved that they went to that wax museum, that is one of the places I want to see in my lifetime! I also thought it was cute when Felicity and Christian went to the fountain in Trafalgar Square. I wanna make wishes like that, and have my wishes come true. :) I hope what Felicity wished for comes true. I want Christian to sweep her off her feet! :D

Update as soon as you can, because this is one of my favorite stories on here! :)

sailorsweetart chapter 10 . 2/26/2012
Aww, cute wish! Hmm... i bet christian wished what she really wished... ;)
gryff101 chapter 9 . 1/11/2012
I was so excited to see that a new chapter was uploaded! I was kinda sad as I was reading that Christian wasn't in this chapter. :( I really wanna see what Felicity and Christian are like now since he saved her life. I hope your next chapter has him in it a lot, because in my eyes he is so cute. :)

Update as soon as you can. :)

sailorsweetart chapter 9 . 1/7/2012
I liked this chaoter alot :) Felicity is so confused, almost dying and whatnot. But hopefuloly, everything will fall into place
Ashia Blue chapter 9 . 1/6/2012
WOW! Even though there's no christian-and-felicity-romantic-scene in this chapter, it's still good. )))

I really laugh at the "Sooooo, do you guys, actually, you know, ride Polar Bears to school?" like, "wow, what a freak" Hohohoh.

Anyway, good job. Update fast. Love it.. ;)


Ashia Blue.
Midnight at Dawn chapter 8 . 1/3/2012

I had to admit I did know Chris would be her soul mate but still its awesome!

I hope it gets really really romantic later.

Good story, write more soon.

Thanks, bye.
gryff101 chapter 8 . 12/24/2011
I was so glad to see a new chapter was uploaded for this story! I love this story, it is so cute. :) You wrote an excellent chapter. I like how you described the landscape of London. I have never been there, and I wanna go so bad. So thank you. :) OMG Felicity almost died! Thank god that Christian was able to save her!

Upload as soon as you can! :)

sailorsweetart chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
Whoo! She was saved from death, huh? Lol Christian to the rescue! Great job!
Ashia Blue chapter 8 . 12/18/2011
i looovveee it! its exciting and fresh. :)) Keep up the excelent work. Still waiting for the next chapter. ;)


Ashia Blue.
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