Reviews for Fated
sailorsweetart chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
Yay they made up! Aww now i feel a little bad for felicity :( Please update soon !
GreenEyedGirl chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
This is good, but a bit too fast paced. You may want to slow things down a bit.
J.J. LaRoux chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
It's a great story so far, you're a really great writer and I hope you write another chapter soon!
sailorsweetart chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
Haha, poor her. Please write more :3
my infectious smile chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
I love how they're thinking of each other...hope they make some memories together while in London!
sailorsweetart chapter 3 . 10/7/2011
God, i love your stories :) SO ADORABLE 3
my infectious smile chapter 2 . 10/2/2011
I like the start of this...I hope you write more!
sailorsweetart chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Haha, i like this guy
Simplywonderful88 chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
This is pretty good, and felicity's apperance sounds eerily like me...(except im 5 ft!) but yeah i like the idea that they were friends and they have a history together and a really personal one at that. the only constructive critisism i have is that why does christian randomly start talking to her again? guys are very loyal and expect their friends to be to, so if a you tell a guys secret they usually never forgive you unlike girls where a hug will fix almost anything. thats just something to remember in the future. other than that i loved it!
SMeary SNails chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
In only the first two chapters, you've made me smile, laugh, exclaim AWWW, feel sadness, EVERYTHING that makes a writing style great.

LOVE how this has started, and I can't wait to see more chapters up!

Keep writing! NOW! :)
sailorsweetart chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
This seems really interesting so far! I hope you write more!
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