I'm liking the new story so far. ;) My favorite part was definitely the bit about Winnie the Pooh giving Jack a thumbs up. That was great. D I have to say that I appreciate all the detail you put into your stories. So many stories are just...devoid of it. And then others just use too much. But yours is juuuust right. lol. )

Yes! Another story! I had already read "When in Rome" and loved it, so naturally, when I saw you had published another story, I was excited. The first chapter is great, and is every bit as good as the last story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!

~NimbusMM