Love this, simple but beautiful :)

beautiful.

I'm normally not a fan of romance/angsty poems, but I really liked this one. I love the lines 'your crinkle-corner eyes/and your patchy beard', really great imagery there. I also really liked the you chose to not capitalize anything, I think that worked really well for the piece. It was short and sweet, but had a really nice flow to it, and you structured everything really well. I know this is a personal poem, and it really says so much with just a few words. I love that about poetry. Great job!

a clever way to put it.. write on

great concept. reads beautifully, too. great job. especially on that ending stanza.

Beautiful. I can definitely relate, and the last stanza is just perfect.