Reviews for Did I Hurt You Yet?
Gertrude Fin chapter 5 . 11/22/2011
whoa... this was cool! sad, and twisted, but really cool! honestly, i think Mina and Lenny did just what needed to be done! altho they coulda spared the baby. i mean, it was just a baby. but oh well...

even though this was a short story, it was a really good read. great job! :D
Gertrude Fin chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
OMFG! That is so sick! good job Marc!

God I feel terrible for his daughter. This is absolutely horrible! Not the writing, but the situation. He rapes his own daughter, and lets the rookie cop do the same! That's absolutely horrid! And I absolutely love it! I love when people aren't afraid to write stuff like this!

You did a great job writing this. I can't wait to see the continuation of it. Excellent job!