|Reviews for The Divine Conspiracy|
| LivesTooShort52 chapter 5 . 12/6/2011
Holy heck. You finally updated. I find this kinda funny, because I'm Buddhist (per my own choice - both of my parents families are Christian). I still love it, though. Maalik confuses me, in a good way. ;)
| LivesTooShort52 chapter 4 . 10/24/2011
Good, but you need a beta. The little grammar errors will put people down almost immediately. Sure, I understand if the first chapter has typos, but after that most of them should be fixed.
Beta reading yourself doesn't work all that well, either.
I'll be your beta if you can't find one.
Again, good job. It could be better though with a little bit more adjectives (describe your moods, surroundings, actions, and reactions more), then you'll have a great book.
| darkness swells around me chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I like the story line so far. I would like to see a bit more detail. good job
| LivesTooShort52 chapter 3 . 10/13/2011
I know that two reviews doesn't seem like a lot... or very motivational, but I just want to tell you that this is really good and if you don't have enough people to write to; keep writing this for yourself.
Please check out one of my one-shots/stories/poems, because everybody needs a little encouragment sometimes. :)
| LivesTooShort52 chapter 2 . 10/10/2011
Really good! Update soon.