Reviews for A Baseball Story
PancakesandProcrastination chapter 9 . 12/11/2013
Awesome, I love it! Haha, managed to stumble across this on one of my friend's Favorite Stories page. It's pretty awesome so far, and realistic.
if cats could fly chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
this was the most amazing story ever! i cant't begin to explain the awesome-ness going on here, please update you have to!
the unbirthday girl chapter 7 . 7/31/2012
I think this is hilarious. And the most ridiculous bet ever.
the unbirthday girl chapter 6 . 7/7/2012
Short and sweet. :) I have an image in my head of everyone I know named Jason wearing pink now. I'll probably burst into giggles next time I see one of them. :P
rookanga chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
please update!
the unbirthday girl chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
You updated! Yay.:) This is really funny and kind of sweet-well, the last one's probably because I'm weird, but whatever. Good job!:D
Manga Fan XD chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
This is the previously anonymous reviewer "Lovely." ...Hi!

But yeah, cute story and all that. For some reason, I keep seeing Emma as Shimana and Jason as Zen from the manga Yumemiru Taiyou. Haha. manga/yumemiru_taiyou

Ah, I can't find the one scene that I wanted to show. Hmm...

Anyways, good luck and update soon!
Manga Fan XD chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Aw. How cute. :)
the unbirthday girl chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
Oh, wow, I feel so sorry for him. This was really funny, and TE dialogue was the main reason why-so don't worry about it. Seriously, great chappie.
the unbirthday girl chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
This is so funny.:) Glad you updated, and the girl's night should be interesting to read about-you're not going to skip it, are you? Anyways, you're still doing a great job with this. :D
Predictator chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
Dude, this story is so freakin cute. I'm not even reviewing coz we made a deal, but coz I think it's freakin cute. oh, and you are so completing this story.
the unbirthday girl chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
I like this chapter. I did catch a little thing where you wrote 'there' instead of 'they're,' though. Where she's loadding the app thingy? Speaking (well, typing) of that...I WANT ONE!:)
Sikari888 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Hahaha lol to the Potter talk. xD
Predictator chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Like I promised I will notify when I update my story and also review ur story in exchange of ur review.

About your new story, its pretty good but unsatisfactory. Don't keep me hanging by writing only one chapter.

BTW, read my new chap 10
the unbirthday girl chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I liked it. It's good so far, keep writing!

-HAPPY WRITING
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