This is really amazing! I'm really enjoying it! I actually HATE Chester! I actually LOVE Daniel! That's my side for you! ;)

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Wow, totally love this story! It'll be so hard trying to wake up for church tomorrow since I was up til 1 reading this...anyway! Totally love it. You write so well! I'm not sure who I like better, Chester or Daniel! Daniel seems to genuinely care about Adina, while Chester acts like he just wants her badly. Love them both and love when Adina makes an appearance. Pleasee update soon! Oh and also I'm waiting for marriage too! Saw it on ur profile:)

I really like this story. Chester seems really interesting for me, and I can't wait until the focus is back onto him and Adina. There are a few spells errors or word-misplacement here and there, but overall it's pretty good. I do find that within the past few chapters there has been less focus on detail and more attention on dialogue. Just a personal preference of mine, I love it when a story has a lot of detail to put into it, as if you were there seeing the events unfold. Anyways, I'm a fan of your works and I have no doubt that this will be just as good as the rest of your works. I'm anxiously awaiting for Adina to arrive back onto the scene and the focus on what all Chester is doing to her.

It's not that I don't want to read about the other characters because this is a story so it's going to have other people in it. It's just that when u post chapters without Adina making any sort of appearance I feel like the story is going away from her and it's not her story anymore. Also, Caroline and Tiger have a very interesting story...see I like reading of the other characters too.

Oh and please don't put up Adina's weird dreams. I hate weird dreams! I'm looking forward to Adina's wake-up and discovering the situatuion she's in and what she's gonna make of it.

Daniel seems really sweet, but way too thick-headed for my liking. Of course, I've hardly met Chester yet but I like him better as of now.

I can't wait for Adina to return. She has an awesome name by the way. I think it suits her.

pretty good come back. great.

Well, I must say I expected whatever were creature that is going to claim Adina to make an earlier appearance rather than halfway into the story. I was starting to think I read the summary wrong and that her boyfriend is actually a were, but then that contradicted the fact that he is a hunter of weres which brought me back to option #1...I misread the summary.

Finally, the were-snake made an appearance but, now Adina's out of action. I'm hoping to read more of Adina's situation rather than the ongoings of the other characters since Adina is the main character. Hopefully u'll update soon with Adina's situatuion/condition.

I really like this story and I can't wait for Daniels reaction to this...

...And the plot thickens! But for real; you're making it so hard for me to choose whom I like better. Chester? Or Daniel? I know, I know; I should pick Daniel, but I can't help it! Chester just seems so much more...bolder I suppose. I like that in a character. It's always so much easier to get a feel for their personality. Or, maybe that's just me? I DO read a lot of stories where brooding men are involved...It seems to be a romance writer's favorite. But, who's complaining?

Chester seems a little too eager, though. He's going to turn out being pretty young in snake terms or something, right? I always like to guess what will happen next. Whenever I actually voice it though, it turns out wrong, so we'll (I'll) just have to see.

Mm'kay. Your writing. It is fabulous~! You've got a few small mistakes here and there where I think you meant to add a word but then forgot (happens to me ALL THE TIME). Your sentences aren't those bulky paragraphs I sometimes stumble upon; 'cause honestly those things get real boring, real fast. People just like to make their stories so descriptive by clumping words together and it's just not working. I applaud your lack of bulk! That's really it about the writing; I sometimes ramble and will go off topic anyway, so I'd better just stop now before I exceed the word limit for a review. But before I do, let me add one more thing. You know how writing styles just give off a sort of vibe? Well yours is like this original, cool type to me. It's obvious you know how to write something decent and aren't following all those ten-year-olds and their Twilight fetishes.

Whoo, holy crud this is long. I am SORRY! In real life I can't form a proper sentence without tripping all over the words in the process and yet here I am, writing a book for you! I THINK I got everything...Oh! Wait! I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE how your characters aren't all white like how some people tend do in their fictions nowadays. I mean even though I am as white as an albino, it's good to know that people still recognize there are other races in the world.

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter,

~Lindsey

I bet those aren't her brother's, good chapter, and sadie reality was annoying the laugh at her tour

Chapter 15 has been really sweet. Cheesy!

Interesting start i wonder if she will be ok ha ha:P

Great story! I love your easy going manner of writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.