|Reviews for if i was still|
| dokidokipanic chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
i really enjoy yout poetry...kinda sad and uplifting in the same beat!
| qubed chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
i quite like the way the thoughts change from one line to the next. your imagery is intense. and i adore your metaphors.
| DaddyLonglegs chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I adore your poetry; it's beautiful. It reminds me of a contemporary e.e. cummings but with a little more angst. If you don't know who I mean read him, I love his poems :) x
| instant bliss chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Oh, this is brilliant. I love the eating motif and the visceral metaphors you make with it - eating words, eating "leftover good wishes". And I love the way you use language and imagery in grotesque, powerful, meaningful ways, like "the torn ligaments of eyes with perfect hindsight" or "don't tell my skin, but my mind is burnt too".
| Inkspilled chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Very interesting, immediately I had to read the first line over again. It seemed to make so much sense without being bluntly open. The descriptions, the way you jump from one thought to another really kept interest. I liked the ending, and I really like the way this was written. Nice job. :)