|Reviews for Infinite Expanse Conquered|
| Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
A very well written piece. Wow this actually made me see the ocean itself as something really rather daunting. I liked how you characterised the sea as 'indefinite' and finished with a nice rhyme with see and history. Very optimistic which was cool.
Good job :)
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Wow, pretty good:)
Must admit I got confused about the rhythm, but then again I'm never good with that...
Anyway, I like the atmosphere - pretty well captured:) I only had to read the first three lines and had the impression of hearing the sea... which I live nowhere near.
I love the last two lines. "The borders from now to history"... "find infinity"... 3
Amazing work:) Keep writing, and thanks for the upload :)
~Dark Blue Lover
| AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Interesting poem. I like it :) I suck at writing poetry personally, but I quite admire people like yourself who can write good poetry :)
If you have time, s/2952890/1/No_Escape
Review back please?
Thanks, take care