Reviews for Death approaches
moon-behind-dark-clouds chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
very powerful imagery. nicely written. thank you for sharing :)
Qiuyi chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Go read 'A tale of love' by nrkchan or something like that

quite interesting!

anyway, this website is so cool! :D

I think I am the only who writes such comments coz the others seems to be very professional and strict! haha

:P
Qiuyi chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Nice one! But somehow, it seems unfinished... Let me continue for you...

Soft, lush petals of

Dark crimson; it blossoms

Across heaving chest.

then, he died.

haha. the last sentence is just for joke. anyway, still the same words, nice one Ruriko!
Kyasariin chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Very nice... I like the dark imagery used here.