|Reviews for empty girls|
| the way you look at me chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I felt like I could really identity with where this is coming from, nice job.
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
i love this.
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
nice use of repetition. i really liked "spill all the sugar inside, / tastes like / diabetes & smoked cigarettes".
| paradisgatan chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Harsh, but provocative. I like the pixie sticks metaphor, especially because of the way you write it - "spill all the sugar inside, / tastes like / diabetes & smoked cigarettes".
I wonder who the speaker is in this poem, and who they're speaking to. I imagine different speakers and the meaning of the poem keeps changing. It's interesting.