Reviews for A Demon's Journal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...okay, did not see that coming. I have an idea of what's gotten to her but is it the right one. Oh and nice choice leaving the night without rain. That was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goth angel eh? I like the new nickname. And anyways the two DO look like they're getting closer. I'm happy for him, still with the development of a conscience he'll still have a ways to go. :) great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhw, look at who's trying out trust for the first time. :) It looks like Maggie and Pain are really starting to bond. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhw, they're bonding :)...sort of. Gotta say, the title misled me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This isn't good. Pain's actually getting worse somehow. Not that I can really blame him. His friends have their work cut out for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This isn't good. Pain's actually getting worse somehow. His friends have their work cut out for them. But seriously what would u do in their situation? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that you told in detail what happened when he was first taken over by the demon. I love the detail you put into this chapter, and will only add please keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not supposed to be particularly even, or ever in one direction of good and bad all the time. The reason something good happened to him was because HE did something good first. So it's amazing he won't try it again. But yea, i do get why he's cautious... and right about being cautious. |