|Reviews for The Source|
| 1LittleRedRidingCrop chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
hehehe.. I don't find it depressing at all! XD
I likes it! :3
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I kinda like this one Dark, but it conveys feeling.
Especially nice how you use such contrasting words "source" and "empty", "wilted" and "dripping"... and then the end as a conclusion. I don't think you need to stress these words specially - I think I caught onto it in the unedited version already, but if it's for rhythm... I've never been good with that
I got kinda confused over the word "arrival" (like: arrival of what? rain? water?)... and the "it is never coming"... but probably I'm just taking those lines too literally-.-
Kinda gave me the impression of "emotional emptiness in contrast to plenty in nature/excess on the outside"... which I'm encountering a lot.
So anyway, great work! Keep writing :)
~Dark Blue Lover