|Reviews for Break the Sky|
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 11 . 6/6/2018
yass best ending
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 10 . 6/6/2018
NOOOOOo JONATHAN STAY!
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 5 . 6/6/2018
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 4 . 6/6/2018
lol this will be good
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 3 . 6/6/2018
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 1 . 6/6/2018
omg I love Jonathan and Demetri.
| xPencilsCamerasx chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
I liked your description of the captain. Captainy, but still quite handsome.
| LesBeatles chapter 11 . 5/1/2014
This was AMAZING! I loved it!
The only thing I kinda wish I could have seen was Jonathan being a DID for a little while. A Dude In Distress. And then Demetri could have been like, his knight in shining armor.
But that would have bit a bit cliche, huh?
Regardless, this story was very creative, well thought-out, and well-written.
Thanks for posting this!
| Willowtm chapter 11 . 11/20/2013
This story is amazing. Its really just incredible. .. The feels, the feels- *swoons* One of the best damn stories that I have read in a long time. I just loce it! And you for writing it! You are amazing!
| Pantu chapter 11 . 10/31/2013
haha, lurkers is such a good name for the readers who don't review. I'm sorry for lurking until the last chapter. Anyway, I enjoyed this. It was short but kind of sweet. my one gripe was with the sex scenes, not because of detail, but because some of their conversation throughout their intimacy seemed a little out of character. I didn't like the swearing, and some of the conversations between the two mc's felt a little forced in places. But overall a throughly enjoyable and sweet slash romp.
Thanks for sharing,
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/16/2013
| Katana Black chapter 11 . 7/21/2012
That was really great! I enjoyed it very, very much. Cute and piratey and adorable! :D Thanks for writing!
| Poppy Flower chapter 11 . 6/24/2012
So what was that thing In the waterfall all about?
I really liked this story, although I couldn't pin point a tIme period. The ending was great. I'm so happy that Jonathan and Dimitri stayed together.
| Chibikodo chapter 11 . 2/27/2012
Aw I thought maybe the cave in the waterfall had something to do with the treasure but I guess I was wrong. I'm glad everyone got a happy ensing, villagers and ex-fiancee included.
| princelybell chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Wow. I'm usually I lurker over on the fanfic side of things, but I was a little bored and felt like something more...original (lol). I'm really intrigued by all this, whatever's going on. I love how you revealed the airship, I didn't suspect for a moment that that was the reason for the clouds being level (but I'm also kind of dense sometimes). Interesting beginning, I look forward to reading the rest!