Reviews for The Littlest Frog of All
caapt.donavin chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
that was short and sweet. a real childerns book and havingthe repedativeness in it made it just like a real childrens book. i could even see the pictures and where eaach page division would be. marvoulouse. D

isn't chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Aw, this made me smile. _ Lovely that you wrote it for your sister. I'm sure she'll like reading it. I also like the quality of your writing and the imagination behind it.

Just a quick pointer though; when people speak, it is usually better to use a comma instead of a semicolon between the quotation marks and the one speaking, and to use single quotations when quoting something in double quotations so you won't confuse the reader. (Ripple replied, "I am too small to small to jump 'hippity hop, drop plop, splash!' into the pond with the other frogs. I am just a tadpole.")

I am very impressed with your writing, though, especially since you're a fairly young writer and you've already got the basics of writing down to a near T.

Keep writing! :)