Reviews for I'll be yours, baby
becquerel chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
i really like these, all of them, but most the first one. possibly because you used the word sardonic, which i - ahaha - had to look up, but now know is an aaaaabsolutely brilliant word. really. thanks for that.

anyways, yeah. will there be more? alerting, just in case there is. the themes in these are intriguing.
Catkac chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
Chapter 3 - So he/she doesn't like the tongue of a person licking him/her? Very interesting. I can relate. :)
Catkac chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
The last stanza is such a contradiction, but that's what makes it interesting. I can't help but wonder if the one in the poem likes to break hearts only to feel his/her heart being broken, or if it's a mental condition of sorts. Or if he/she breaks a heart without meaning to and then it breaks his/her heart... So many possibilities.
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I love this one :) The last two lines are beautiful.