Reviews for Ascension
valentina smith chapter 2 . 12/30/2022
i like it
cassiemhdz chapter 1 . 11/15/2022
Jiordan chapter 53 . 7/24/2021
OMG YES! It’s finally completed :) I first read Metamorphosis wayy back when you started writing it in 2011 and was completely invested in it. This will always remain my absolute favourite story on this site. You must feel so happy that it’s all done. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I think I need to go back and reread the whole thing again. Wishing you all the best!
CheckerboardBunny chapter 53 . 5/24/2021
Thank you for finishing the story! It was amazing! I finally got to reread both stories again to finish the last chapter! :)
The Beautiful Filth chapter 53 . 6/30/2020
Almost crying when I saw this. Thank you xx
MovieReviewer1234 chapter 53 . 6/28/2020
Wow. I began reading Metamorphosis way back in 2011, and now here we are in 2020. So much time has gone by, yet in a lot of ways, it feels like none has at all.

I was hooked right off the bat. The character interactions came off the page so naturally that it was as though I were watching an HBO miniseries. Waiting for a new chapter often felt like waiting for the next episode of my new favorite show. Even when updates came months apart, I still remembered who everyone was, what they had gone through, and how they'd ended up where they were in the latest entry.

Your prowess with a pen inspired me to be more introspective when creating characters and plots. You've provided many avenues of thought I can and have applied to my own writing and for that, I thank you.

I'll admit, there were times when I was sure you'd given up and moved on from completing the story. While I was disappointed, I accepted the prospect that I may not get to know the end. Life happens and you'd already pushed through more than I feel most people would have at that point. You were under no obligation to begin writing Metamorphosis and Ascension, nor were you under any likewise obligation to finish either, but you did. Without monetary compensation, without guarantee of recognition. On that front, again, I salute you and extend my appreciation.

I will never forget Mira Pascal or Seth Elsen. Or Paige or Sara or Brian or Ava or Zeke or Matt or Jamie or Leda or Marli. And of course, I won't ever forget "Sunshine," the one who started it all.

- Shaun
drummergotbeat chapter 53 . 6/27/2020
I’ve been following since Metamorphosis. Both Metamorphosis and this story are incredible. This was such a great ending. As a reader, it was so exciting to follow you on this journey. Very excited to see what you do next 3
percyjacksonfan135 chapter 53 . 6/26/2020
I absolutely love this! There is so much heart in this and I hope you continue. You said that Zach was a baker, but what else? Is he married? Does he have children? I wana know what his adult life is like.
nickturcotte12 chapter 53 . 6/26/2020
I started reading metamorphosis at around the age of 12 or 13. Even though the stories came in spurts here and there, I never stopped waiting and longing for more of mira and Seth's journey. I'm super sad this is the end of the story and I really hope you write more. Maybe something from Lucy's pov. Your writing inspired me and my writing in so many ways, especially being a self taught writer. I'm nowhere as talented as you but I want to thank you for this beautiful story about teen pregnancy and for the positivity it gave the 10 year journey since starting to read it of my adolescence. Being 23 now and struggling with writer's block, I can look at your determination and drive to finish and use it as motivation to finish my own story(s). Best of luck to you and your future endeavors in writing.
Colethewhitewalker chapter 1 . 6/26/2020
Omg. Please I am CRYING I was addicted to this story as a teen better than some books over read. I'm so glad you finished it and I love the ending thank you for that. I loved it
Jo chapter 53 . 6/26/2020
Wow. I started reading this when I was 13 years old. Never forgot this story. And here I am, 23. Logged back in for the incredible epilogue. Well done. Your words have touched worlds.
Robert Gutheim chapter 53 . 6/26/2020
Might be interesting to see what Lucy is like when she is older. Either in her teens or as an adylt
Henry chapter 52 . 6/22/2020
Looooove it! #700!
The Beautiful Filth chapter 52 . 3/29/2020
u know who binch chapter 52 . 3/28/2020
Aw, I liked the way that it was partially from lil gal's perspective. And I love how extra Mira is, such a mom, dressing her kid in a nice outfit even though everyone knew it was gonna be ruined in five seconds.
Am I the only one who doesn't like chocolate cake? Vanilla for me baby.
LOL at Seth not knowing which screwdriver is which.
ahahahah I totally believed the bit where Mira said she was pregnant. It actually wouldn't surprise me since half of all the people I went to high school with who had a kid are onto like their third by now.
Good job on updating!
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