Reviews for Ascension
myheart4you chapter 40 . 10/5/2013
Oh shucks. I did read this a while ago, I just didn't have time to review it. I loved that line in the beginning "Mira really had the hardass parenting stare down.. LOL

I totally thought she was going to make fun of them and be all sarcastic and bitchy when she showed up in her rainbow outfit, and I was like "That's totally not her." But she was nice so that's good.

Yeah, Ryan's father is an asshole. I hate that he manipulated his son into believing those things.

Guest chapter 40 . 9/24/2013
Ryan's dad is such an asshole! I hate him!
And aww Seth and Mira are adorable
Shaun chapter 40 . 9/16/2013
Zack's reaction to when Paige told him is actually what I'd expect a kid his age to say. It was convincing enough.

Interesting how you say there aren't many men in your family, yet all of the guys in the story feel completely like actual teenage boys.

Yeah, this was a filler chapter, but it was still fun. Leda is hilarious. Imagining Sarah Michelle Gellar deliver her lines is an easy task. Her personality reminds me so much of Buffy.

It's understandable why Mira would feel a little weirded out by the revelation of Paige and Sara being together. The question "Have they ever thought that way about me?" is something I used to wonder when I was younger once I found out one of my best friends was gay.

In the back of my head, I'm kinda hoping there'll be some kind of physical altercation between Seth and Ryan's father. I can see Seth beating Russell down and thinking about his own father or something. As if Seth's malice towards Russell partially stems from the parallels between him and Joseph.

This story is so much fun to read. Never been this invested in an online story before.
claritylong chapter 40 . 9/15/2013
woohoo! i am so happy with this story!
Skylair Hernandez chapter 40 . 9/15/2013
Another awesome chapter. I'm glad Mira has accepted Sara and Paige. Please update again soon!
Collabkk chapter 40 . 9/15/2013
Omg cool chapter 40! And this was an awesome birthday present!
Guest chapter 39 . 8/30/2013
Amazing! Update soon
euphoria.c chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Amazing! Post more chapters... Or else! lol I'M #555! :D
Arasimagination chapter 39 . 8/20/2013
I liked this chapter even though it feels weird to read a chapter at a time because I'm not really used to it...I read straight through the stories until the last chapter. I would say though that I liked it better when your writing seemed a bit more natural, it was easier to get wrapped up in the story. Great job though!

myheart4you chapter 39 . 8/19/2013
*giggles* you mentioned my character :3

Uhmm... So I'm getting some foreshadowing from the whole "Matt misses Jamie" thing, and correct me if I'm wrong.

And of course, I'm getting all this foreshadowing from her thinking about marriage. Seth actually seems very mature for his age, I just realized that. All the seventeen year olds I know wouldn't be up for everything he and Mira went through.

Wait... I.,. Don't remember anything you told me about how she reacts or what they find out with Ryan and junk. Oh well. It'll be like you never told me :3
Skylair Hernandez chapter 39 . 8/19/2013
This chapter is awesome. It's cute that Matt misses Jamie and Luke, but he should just phone her, they are really cute together. It's also cute that Mira wants to marry Seth.

The ending of this chapter is ace. The part where Seth slips Ava a twenty is hilarious. I can't wait to find out what Mira's reaction will be. I think she will be upset that they didn't tell her.

Keep up the good work!
Shaun chapter 39 . 8/19/2013
Somehow, I think Mira's gonna go "Why didn't you tell me? I thought you were my friends." or something. She might even be upset with Seth too, seeing has they've basically made the "no more secrets" promise. On the other hand, Mira could just be happy for Sara and Paige, and is just stunned. I mean, I would be.

The bit where Seth slipped Ava a twenty was hilarious.

Is Mira seriously thinking about marrying Seth? Maybe her dad shouldn't have put the idea into her head. She's probably gonna start obsessing about it now. At least her dad finally got over himself.

And, of course, Matt's been missing Jamie. He should just pick up the phone and call her. His interactions with Leda are fun, though. It's gonna be interesting to see how she deals with being a mother. Unless the story ends when her son is born...?
Kaitlin1198 chapter 39 . 8/18/2013
Yepppp can't wait for more !
Elastic chapter 39 . 8/18/2013
Awesome! I am so glad this chapter finally happened! I feel like Mira will be kind of upset/mad that her friends didn't tell her, maybe even more upset/mad that Seth didn't tell her. I'm glad that the story is starting to focus on more plots instead of just Mira/her actions. It makes it a truly unique read. :) Can't wait until the next update.
Guest chapter 39 . 8/18/2013
I absolutely love this story! I've read the first story twice and this one two times as well-well up to where you've written to. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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