|Reviews for Ascension|
| mysterygirl450 chapter 49 . 10/19/2015
Awww! That was so cute, I love how you portray Lucy! This story is amazing, I couldn't stop reading!
| Bbbbbananas chapter 49 . 8/29/2015
I love this story soooooooo much!
| Guest chapter 49 . 8/24/2015
This is one of the best books I have read. I can't wait for another chapter which I hope will come soonish.
| Guest chapter 43 . 8/24/2015
It's soooo good. I have been addicted for the last week.
| Hi chapter 49 . 8/10/2015
| Katherine chapter 49 . 7/30/2015
Aw, I just re-read the last few chapters, and I still love this story so much! I've been following since probably halfway through Metamorphosis? Really hope you get the chance to update at some point, it's a fantastic story and I'm so excited to see how it progresses! But obviously don't worry if it takes a while - in any case, your updates are always worth waiting for! :D
| HooflePoof chapter 49 . 5/11/2015
I just re-read both Metamorphosis and Ascension over the last week, and I'm absolutely stunned by how much stuff Mira went through over the course of a year and a handful of months! Holy crap!
I really hope Maddiecat decides to update again, 'cause I miss this story to bits! I've been following since pretty much halfway through Metamorphosis, which was like... years ago!
Wow... Mira's been a part of my life a long time. :)
| Colethewhitewalker chapter 49 . 4/11/2015
Gah! I'm so fruatrated with you making me so addicted to a story!. Really though it's amazing and I hope you do finish it when you get time. It can be so hard with everything else going on in life to sit and write so hang in there don't stress. Hoping everything is well with you. As for everyone being negative how about give the girl a break ? She is not paid to sit and write all the time for your entertainment she has a life outside of her stories and as we all know life is full of unexpected bumps so have some respect and consideration.
| anon chapter 49 . 3/1/2015
when are you updating? i miss this story :(
| Guest chapter 49 . 2/14/2015
I'm excited for spirit week, as it was very eventful in metamorphosis. did i spell that right? i hope you update soon. still enjoying this sorry very much
| Sarah chapter 49 . 1/24/2015
that was such a good chapter! I'm glad she's alright! it's super cool that Lucy said her first word too. I'm liking all these new developments happening too with all the characters. that's what I really like about your writing is that every occurance is important and even the more minor characters are fleshed out and super developed. great work :)
| Guest chapter 49 . 11/10/2014
I'm a teenage mother, I was sitting in the food court with my boyfriend and our 7 week old son, breastfeeding him. We were on the edge, away from everyone and his blanket was covering us. You could not see a thing when suddenly this couple came over to us, first told us off for being teenage parents and then to me about breastfeeding my son in public. I was so humiliated I couldn't help but cry. Like as if I would dare feed my hungry child. The nerve of some people.
Anyway, awesome chapter as always. So glad that Mira is alright. Interesting that Ava's mum is back in the picture. And Lucy, god love her. Mira will be so happy to hear her say 'mama'
| collabkk chapter 49 . 11/10/2014
Awww everything is going well... At least for lucy and Seth! I love how you wrote this. Maybe Seth can just spend the night with lucy at the pascals house and Carolyn can really just go away (sry she annoys me) but that's so cute! I love Lucy ll say mah mah again once Mira wakes up.
| Sloppy Joe 313 chapter 49 . 11/9/2014
This was so sweet at the end! I loved how everybody was making amends and then there was Seth's mom XD. I also loved how sassy Leda and Marli were! (Btw sry I'm too lazy to log in)
| anonymous mouse chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
YOU CRAZY ASS HOW DARE YOU MAKE LEDA STAND UP FOR HERSELF BREASTFEEDING HER OWN CHILD IN PUBLIC YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED IM NEVER READING THIS STORY AGAIN YOU JUST HATE EVERYTHING I STAND FOR HOW DARE YOU WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT IN PUBLIC SO GROSS WHY DO YOU HAVE A CHILD SWEARING THIS IS THE WORST BOOK EVER IM DONE
lolol love you. Just kidding. I hope I did justice.
SHE SAID MAMA OMIGOSH. ABOUT TIME WHAT A FREAKIN' CUTIE PIE. The only complaint is that I wanted to see the couple's reactions to Leda's bitchfest lolol. Also, so Mira didn't hear her FREAKIN SAY MAMA?
I wanna see her reaction to that.