Sooooooooo sweet! I'm glad they're OK and I hope Seth and Mira are okay

I'm sorry, but this was the last straw. You have a problem with conservatives? It's pretty damn well clear in your writing. I used to like this story, but I can't take your passive aggressive judgement. Get over yourself. I'm leaving this story behind. You've done it for me.

Not bad, but I sense a lot of tension between families.

Go, Marli! Oh, my god, my three year old niece did something similar a few months ago...Hilarious!

Very nice. I was worried there for a minute. These kids sure go through a lot of heavy stuff.

It's hilarious that Marli is picking up Leda's tendencies. I laughed at what she said to Carolyn, even though I wish she and Mira's family would get a long a bit better.

Leda's little tirade was a little preachy, but warranted. It kind of reminded me of the movie "This Film Is Not Yet Rated", and how parents would rather their children see dismemberment happen in a movie, but nudity is the ultimate taboo.

I'm trying to think of a guess as to what they'd all be wearing for Spirit Week, but I've never been one for fashion, so I've got nothing.

Still interested in seeing how this all will end.

I love it keep going!

Good chapter. Glad that Mira and Lucy were alright.

Oh; she won't die, will she? I really like this! Can you please do a chapter where Zack baby-sits?

Please update!

Update

OH MY GOSH WHAT!? Holy shit is that a cliffhanger you evil person! Please update I'm dying to know what happens what's going on with bridgette? more importantly WILL AVAS PARTY STILL BE ON? and will Mira bitch slap her two co workers? So much to know

Gah! No way! I don't think you'be earned the right for a cliffhanger...but your story and writing is so poor amazing and I can understand that life gets in the way of writing sometimes so you are forgiven... as long as you don't leave us hanging again

Oh yeah, I did finish this, I just forgot. So much happened in this chapter. Poor Mira. She's just never going to catch a break, is she? *sigh*
Oh Seth. I feel you about the marriage thing, but come on, don't be a dick.
Lol, Ava's so casual with Bridgett now, it's kinda funny. "Relax, B" lol

Overall, well written, intense stuff. Very excellent, as usual, and of course, it's leaving me hanging and you better hurry up and write the next chapter. (totally kidding of course, I of all people understand how it is) but yeah, awesome

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...no. :'( if you hurt either of them I will HURT you and I mean Physically hurt you. I mean who is evil enough to end a Hiatus with a Cliffie No just NOOO... meanie

No! No No No n No! Please update soon or I will die u cant leave it like that. I cant believe u did thattttt ahhhhhh! Awesome chapter tho.

Oh oh oh no! Please don't krt anything major be wrong with them! Plzzzz! OMG u HAVE to update soon! Pleaseeee! Post more ASAP!