|Reviews for Ascension|
| ladierocker chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
Sooooooooo sweet! I'm glad they're OK and I hope Seth and Mira are okay
| Loud Silence chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
I'm sorry, but this was the last straw. You have a problem with conservatives? It's pretty damn well clear in your writing. I used to like this story, but I can't take your passive aggressive judgement. Get over yourself. I'm leaving this story behind. You've done it for me.
| It's me chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
Not bad, but I sense a lot of tension between families.
Go, Marli! Oh, my god, my three year old niece did something similar a few months ago...Hilarious!
| Shaun chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
Very nice. I was worried there for a minute. These kids sure go through a lot of heavy stuff.
It's hilarious that Marli is picking up Leda's tendencies. I laughed at what she said to Carolyn, even though I wish she and Mira's family would get a long a bit better.
Leda's little tirade was a little preachy, but warranted. It kind of reminded me of the movie "This Film Is Not Yet Rated", and how parents would rather their children see dismemberment happen in a movie, but nudity is the ultimate taboo.
I'm trying to think of a guess as to what they'd all be wearing for Spirit Week, but I've never been one for fashion, so I've got nothing.
Still interested in seeing how this all will end.
| percyjacksonfan135 chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
I love it keep going!
| Guest chapter 49 . 11/7/2014
Good chapter. Glad that Mira and Lucy were alright.
| Laura chapter 48 . 10/24/2014
Oh; she won't die, will she? I really like this! Can you please do a chapter where Zack baby-sits?
| thatgirlwiththeboy chapter 48 . 10/12/2014
| Guest chapter 48 . 10/11/2014
| Guest chapter 48 . 10/2/2014
OH MY GOSH WHAT!? Holy shit is that a cliffhanger you evil person! Please update I'm dying to know what happens what's going on with bridgette? more importantly WILL AVAS PARTY STILL BE ON? and will Mira bitch slap her two co workers? So much to know
| ladierocker chapter 48 . 9/25/2014
Gah! No way! I don't think you'be earned the right for a cliffhanger...but your story and writing is so poor amazing and I can understand that life gets in the way of writing sometimes so you are forgiven... as long as you don't leave us hanging again
| myheart4you chapter 48 . 9/23/2014
Oh yeah, I did finish this, I just forgot. So much happened in this chapter. Poor Mira. She's just never going to catch a break, is she? *sigh*
Oh Seth. I feel you about the marriage thing, but come on, don't be a dick.
Lol, Ava's so casual with Bridgett now, it's kinda funny. "Relax, B" lol
Overall, well written, intense stuff. Very excellent, as usual, and of course, it's leaving me hanging and you better hurry up and write the next chapter. (totally kidding of course, I of all people understand how it is) but yeah, awesome
| misssmiley03 chapter 48 . 9/23/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...no. :'( if you hurt either of them I will HURT you and I mean Physically hurt you. I mean who is evil enough to end a Hiatus with a Cliffie No just NOOO... meanie
| Emma chapter 48 . 9/22/2014
No! No No No n No! Please update soon or I will die u cant leave it like that. I cant believe u did thattttt ahhhhhh! Awesome chapter tho.
| collabkk chapter 48 . 9/22/2014
Oh oh oh no! Please don't krt anything major be wrong with them! Plzzzz! OMG u HAVE to update soon! Pleaseeee! Post more ASAP!