Reviews for accidental epiphanies
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Even though I thought the rhythm had me trying to adapt, it actually worked pretty nicely. I like how the ending of a stanza leads to another, though I don't think I like how you used unconsciously right after conscious, and then used it again in the second stanza. It's probably just the off pattern of multi-syllable words between words with fewer syllables. Though, I do really like the end, the rhythm seems to even itself out and conclude nicely. Nice work. :)