Reviews for Rise Inside
Stormfeather chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
"That being said, I conclude this rhyme" does seem just a little bit out of place but i like it anyway. I love the conclusion of the second stanza "That I knew this would happen; I told you so."
Penmaster51 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
A wonderful poem! I think I have to say this is my favorite of your work :) The verses/lines flow with each other wonderfully! Though the line "That being said, I conclude this rhyme" seems a bit out of place; almostl like it's breaking the fourth wall or whatever; I'm not sure how to explain it. But it does keep the poem moving, so I guess it's perfectly fine the way it is :)

Great work! :D
Astraea Athena chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
This is very catchy, I like your use of rhyme and the thundering conclusion in the second stanza of That I knew this would happen; I told you so. It's very effective.