Reviews for My Small Buttercup
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Great piece! I love how the imagery you use runs through the piece like a thread, particularly the images of butterflies and flowers. The only little problems are in grammar - for example, you switch tenses at the beginning of the poem, and some punctuation might help with meaning and flow. The language, however, is excellent and really builds up an image in the reader's head. Very uplifting :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Loveee it makes me feel all happy and the similes are smiley :D poetic masterpiece
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
This is amazing, I like how it flows but I think that you mention

wander when you mean wonder. Might be wrong but just thought I'd point it out!

Keep writing its really good.