Reviews for Fallen
Michael Jackson freak chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
this would actually make for a great story. for it to continue would be epic. :D
cupcake-ninja chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I love this. Like, a lot. How old are you? I write stories kinda like this sometimes, having to do with angels and such, and I really like this one. *clap clap*
DanielStalwart chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
I like this. The way the main sinned for every stage in sequence. Its like how he counted down to his demise

However I do find the overuse of fullstops and commas too annoying. Try to cut it down