aww, thats a pity :(

but i do understand what you mean. I also have incomplete stories coz i either lack inspiration and dont know what to write or coz i just dont have the time.

Good luck with your other stories! :)

I LOVED IT! Definitely worth the wait! I loved the changing of perspective in that one minute i was reading about Alex the next about James (I love that name!). I like that it is written in third person because although sometime first person makes it easier to relate and be the character in certain cases I think that third person is great as it allows you to see situations tha main character doesn't and be omniscient, knowing everything about what has happened. I like the gap (eight years later) but I also really want to know what happened in that gap. How did Alex become a spy; how did she get such a high rating; why is she in need of protection and from whom? I would also quite like it if you explained just how high in the spying business she is as I don't actually understand what Agent 314 of Sector A in Class 1.5 of Sublevel 4 means. by the way, you wrote Agent 12 and Agent 122 to describe Andrew Curtin. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon.

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I really loved your prologue for this story. I was searching for stories like this and found yours. Although you haven't written a lot yet it is already one of my favourite stories and the story I check my profile for. I loved your two ending sentences; it made me really want to find out what would happen when she attends the school. I like how you characterised Alex and the boy (who's name I don't yet know). Your scene between the two children was exactly what I would imagine it to be between two children their age; arguing about gender and abilities. i would like to know more about Alex and the boy and how they've grown up which I'm sure will be shown soon. I'm happy to say that I have no criticisms to make. Only that I hope the next chapter will be out soon. I was very upset when I found out there was only one chapter; i wanted to continue reading. I can't wait to read more and thank you for reading my review.

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dont let him recognize her. that'll be soo borin

I think he should have like a de ja vu feeling or something about her

For a first chapter, this isn't bad at good, actually but it has little typos here and there. But nothing that a beta can't fix. I think that he shouldn't recognize her, it'll make the story more interesting. Update soon!

i don't think he should recognise her yet, but when he does evenutally he should freak out majorly.

no don't let him recognise her yet she should drop hints so he gets it XD

nice chapter :)

I just don't like it but I also love it! I can see and I like where this story is going and even thought it's the 'chidlhood best friend or enemy' (am I right?) cliche (Hell, I love cliches) I think and I know that this is not going to suck and is going to be unpredictable. After reading this chapter or prologue I know you're gonna be an excellent author someday.

I do like :)

I'll defs keep reading when you update

This story is so rocking! You're good with explaining everything, and you should totally continue this story. :D

Hey dude, awesome idea, I know how much you've always loved spy schools :) Love the title too by the way and Alex seems badass even at the age of 7 :D

We both know that girls are better than boys especially because we don't need to deal with massive egos hehe

I can just hear our friend and you know who I'm talking about giving her morality lectures on 'what's wrong with today's society' ;)

DXR

OMG! i love it!

it's really good! no joke

reminds me of Gallagher girls :)

i love how the story started!

Please continue! 3 :)

interesting, please update chapter 1... :D