Reviews for Dark ages rebellion
GretchGoodwin chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
What is this? I don't even.

This isn't exactly poetic. It reads like you just wrote a paragraph of prose and then cut it up so that it would sorta look like poetry. It's choppy as hell and it flows like molasses in an igloo.

Also: "as I try to fight those who evaded the king's castle," The fuck? A building is an inanimate object.
Evelyn Thorn chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
the flow of the poem is a little rough in patches but overall the poem is really nice.
RequiemStargazer chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
It's a classic story and it never gets old; the king, the rebel and the wizard. I'm a lover of fantasy and history, and this was pretty good. Nice job. :] I'm glad I was able to inspire you.