Reviews for Black Heart
Kris chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Hmm well i see the cookieness in the story but theres not enough butter in your cxocanuts you need to shasmas your limes just my thought
Madde.LH14 chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
This story is very interesting. I like how it shows the main characters personality right away. Just one thing I don't know the main characters name. If you mention it even just once I probably would remember it because he has so much overal I really like this story. update soon 8)
VeryLovely chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Um, you are using the instead of the ' needed for words such as it's. I don't know why, but this story is kind of intriguing in a weird way even though at this point it makes no sense.