|Reviews for Suite Heaven|
| luchia.sakura.9 chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
o PLEASE UPDATE THIS I ALREADY FINISHED 2 OF YOUR STORIES I AM CRAVING FOR MORE REVERSE HAREM
| Singing Ink chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
* puppy eyes* updates...updates...
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
| extrapolating ideas chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
"I just want awaken her female instincts, no matter how thick-headed a girl is being surrounded by rich men cannot stop a woman."
This. I have so many problems with this. What in the world is a female instinct? The socially constructed norm that women need to have long hair and wear makeup and like the color pink and be attracted to men?
Sexuality is so much more than "thick-headedness." It is at the core of someone's entire being. It doesn't change on a whim, and it certainly isn't inherently an explanation for poor grades as Karen's mother states it is. And, furthermore, as Karen was apparently threatened as a child and is deeply scarred by the event - and has given no indication that she actually received professional help regarding her anxiety - but her parents thought it would be a good idea to force her into living with boys makes the entirety of this piece unrealistic in the worst of ways.
| Little Miss StormCloud chapter 4 . 1/20/2012
| conti siegel chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
… 's gay, huh?Interesting.
I think I need to get used to the writing style as well, I also sometimes don't know who's talking.
| TO-OLazyToLogin chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
Woah! He's gay huh. I guess that could be a problem for Karen if he brings his boyfriend round. Nice chapter.
| BlueKnicksnKnacks chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
I really like the plot, it's brilliant. The writing style is a bit confusing- sometimes I don't know who's talking. But I love how its set up!
Don't leave me at a cliffhanger! Bring on the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2011
I like the ,please?:)
| TO-OLazyToLogin chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Haha Yes this is good! Plz continue! But keep going with welcome to the club of delinquents too-I love it!