|Reviews for You|
| whirlwinds.of.water chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Understandable, I really hate it when annoying people annoy so much...ugh...
| pockets.of.light chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
This seems like an outpour of angsty grief. What context is this? An abusive relationship? A control-freak boyfriend?
You've portrayed the anger bottled up inside very well.
Keep it up! :D
| ForThoseNotBreathing chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
"You know what's ironic,
Just so barbaric?
How you open the door
Just so you can close it again
How you restart my heart
Just so you can finish me off"
I adore those lines. Reminds me really strongly of something a guy once did to me - this whole piece did. I love the ending, and how you rose above it, by admitting you were no better than the person you're addressing. The rhyme worked really well to hold it together :) And I'm the kind of person that usually doesn't like rhyme. Keep writing :)