This is honestly SO creative. It's refreshing and original and different and I'm aware I'm using synonymous adjectives but I just want to get that across :D

D: Max's mansion is on fire? That was unexpected...

at first i thought luke was going to kill himself but oh wow now he's really gonna screw stuff up! this is getting SO good! update soon .

oh yeah, I almost forgot about Luke. I hope he doesn't do something stupid. I'm happy he deeply regrets his mistake. If he just shrugged it off like I thought he would, I would have been pretty mad.

Wow! It took a lot for me to process all of that! I cant believe that Robert-or should I say Tristan- has a daughter! I really do hope that he finds her.

-PurpleEmoChick

I love this! Please update soon x I can see why she thinks of him as a hero though lol x

Wow, this was completely unexpected!

:o Sophie is very forgiving. If I were her I wouldn't ever be able to see Tristan the same way ever again after learning he had a child.

gosh you are such a good writer :)

Poor Rylan! I hope the doctor is wrong x and poor gwyn, trust it to be left to her to deal with teddy haha x Update whenever you can but please soon :) x

:o Holy moly Roly Poly where did Teddy get that from?

they are just TOO cute! *squeal* update soon . but i still don't get what paintings exactly they need to steal, why are those painting specifically imp? what are they the paintings of? O.O

This chapter had an amazing ending i loved it! xx Update soon please x

You're such a fantastic writer. I've been waiting for ages for an update and when I checked there were two! Can't wait for more!

I love how this chapter had such suspense and action in it coupled with the super adorableness at the end! :)