Reviews for The Canvas |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say that this is one of the best stories that I have read on FP. It is just wonderfully written to every detail so you know exactly what is happening and you get the full picture which I really like. Also cant wait to see what happens in the morning...things seem to be getting interesting between the two of them. -PurpleEmoChick |
![]() ![]() NO! SOPHIE ! how could she be so stupid! as if max would just LEAVE his stuff there? i mean gullible much? and also, why would you not take weapons with you or keep your guard up? why would you not assume that he cam still see throu the cameras but maybe throu his OTHER lil beach house! sigh idiot sophie . update soon plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is just cruel! How could you end the chapter like this? I really want to know who's holding the gun now. The obvious answer would be Max but imagine if it's Luke, or Diana? -PurpleEmoChick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let Rylan get better please! i loved the bits between Rob and Sophie, they were magical... but please update soon! i need to know what happens next x |
![]() ![]() Makes me think if there really was a letter in the first place. |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOO RYLAN NO U CANT DIE! u idiot why'd u come in the first place? who the hell told you to come? why didn't you just wait like always? YOU CANT DIE! what about being with the love of your life? and getting out at 18? DONT DIE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exceptionally brilliant. Had me groping for more after each chapter ended. You've taken a fairly overused story concept and developed it into something wonderful. I really can't wait for more : ) All the best xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooo Poor Rylan! Bring him back please bring him back xx Update soon xx |
![]() ![]() Absolutely adore this story! I've today! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I just cant believe that rylan got shot. -PurpleEmoChick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for replying! Oh god oh god this story is so amazingly interesting! I'm so confused right now though xD Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww! Please update soon i need to know what happens next and i love Robert :D x |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last little bit was s cute, i lvoed the action in this! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? Oh no they have to find teddy x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her parents are still alive? oh and Robert seems so sweet x the girl time they had was so cute too x |