Reviews for The Canvas
Cassandra Elizabeth chapter 18 . 3/28/2012
I have to say that this is one of the best stories that I have read on FP. It is just wonderfully written to every detail so you know exactly what is happening and you get the full picture which I really like. Also cant wait to see what happens in the morning...things seem to be getting interesting between the two of them.

o.m.g chapter 17 . 3/27/2012
NO! SOPHIE ! how could she be so stupid! as if max would just LEAVE his stuff there? i mean gullible much? and also, why would you not take weapons with you or keep your guard up? why would you not assume that he cam still see throu the cameras but maybe throu his OTHER lil beach house! sigh idiot sophie . update soon plz
Cassandra Elizabeth chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
That is just cruel! How could you end the chapter like this? I really want to know who's holding the gun now. The obvious answer would be Max but imagine if it's Luke, or Diana?

Chola13 chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
Let Rylan get better please! i loved the bits between Rob and Sophie, they were magical... but please update soon! i need to know what happens next x
sone chapter 17 . 3/24/2012
Makes me think if there really was a letter in the first place.
no chapter 16 . 3/20/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOO RYLAN NO U CANT DIE! u idiot why'd u come in the first place? who the hell told you to come? why didn't you just wait like always? YOU CANT DIE! what about being with the love of your life? and getting out at 18? DONT DIE!
Suppy chapter 16 . 3/20/2012
Exceptionally brilliant. Had me groping for more after each chapter ended. You've taken a fairly overused story concept and developed it into something wonderful. I really can't wait for more : )

All the best xx
Chola13 chapter 16 . 3/19/2012
Nooooooo Poor Rylan! Bring him back please bring him back xx

Update soon xx
Lolita chapter 16 . 3/18/2012
Absolutely adore this story! I've today!
Cassandra Elizabeth chapter 16 . 3/18/2012
Great chapter. I just cant believe that rylan got shot.

dream-beautiful chapter 16 . 3/17/2012
Thanks for replying! Oh god oh god this story is so amazingly interesting! I'm so confused right now though xD Update soon!
Chola13 chapter 15 . 3/13/2012
Awwww! Please update soon i need to know what happens next and i love Robert :D x
Chola13 chapter 11 . 3/13/2012
The last little bit was s cute, i lvoed the action in this! xx
Chola13 chapter 9 . 3/13/2012
What? Oh no they have to find teddy x
Chola13 chapter 8 . 3/13/2012
Her parents are still alive? oh and Robert seems so sweet x the girl time they had was so cute too x
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