Reviews for The Forgotten Dollhouse
TruffleHead chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Hey, this was actually pretty cool. Yes, at first, it was pretty saddening, but then you came back with those last three lines and the reader goes, 'okay, well, it's like a circle of life! It'll be okay!' :D You have a way with words and messing with our emotions! :D
The only line that I thought was a little awkward was this one, "For years no flesh touched". It's a good line as far as the idea goes, and it really gets it's point across, but I don't know. Maybe it's just my brain going whako and it's really fine. The rest of the poem certainly was! It was a work of art! :D Still cannot believe this was reviewless. I really enjoyed. :)