He really is a bastard...poor girl. What plan's is he talking about? Omg I'm feeling very anxious right now.

I feel sorry for her, I really do. Please update soon :D

Well I'm sad to hear that we may not see the story for a while, if ever but a rewrite sounds cool. I enjoyed the story so far but having it in Stephs pov would be great. Anyways good luck with getting your other story published sweetie. :3

What, no I really like this story! But I don't get you whats going hapenwith this story? Are you going to rewrite it and post it up again or what?

Wow, pretty intense, but it's an interesting story, be good to see where you go with this. That's a pretty awful thing to get over.

Great :D

Poor girl. We knew it was coming though. I can't wait to see what direction you take this story!

Wow what a prick, seriously. I didn't think it would happen like that and that he would speak so casually about murdering her mom. But alas he is a vampire prick lol, and aside from the fucked up nature of him and the entire chapter I have to admit that he is a very good villain, you write him well. I can't expect that the following chapter will hold anything good for Cecilia. Hope you update soon!

Holy ice cream, thats not good. Please update soon :D

this chapter made me cry

i love your story, great work :)

I like your story, and Steph weirds me out. I can't wait to see where this goes, and so far I like peter.

Well that's not very motherly at all, trying to get rid of your daughter just to go have sex even after you haven't seen her for so long. Maybe he's really packing it in that department lol. And obviously we know why Steph is upset, though more so about her mentioning and talking to Peter, jealously is a bitter monster indeed.

Wow this is really interesting. Please update soon :D

Too bad it probally won't :(

Great chapter :)

Wow this is a really good start. Please update soon :D