update? please?

any chance this will ever get updated, it's one of the kind and can't help but wonder where it was going. keeping fingers crossed

I don't know if you'll ever read this, but please update!

You should Update.

I want you to update; it's such a unique story line.

OMG have to update soon

Awsome story, you should continue it. Im like your number one fan right now.

hope that boy, Larry, didn't find the merboy. after all, she shot like a bat out of hell after she heard enough stories.

Even though it's only the first chapter, I really like reading this! Hope you put up another chapter soon. :)

Wow, this is really good! I was wondering if you could read and review my story called "Closed Doors Wanting to be Opened" I would really appreciate that!

Love this already! Please, PLEASE have more!

I have got to say, the story's summary definitely caught my attention. Very interesting concept with the breast infatuation Anemone seems to harbour, also curious as why Maddy's not aroused by any of this activity.

please write more! its really good