Interesting. I like it.

Keep it up.

*le envy* i wish i could wow people like you just did. My socks have been knocked off. ****congratsssss****

Dark with what may be a hint of jealousy.

:)

Although I am by no means a poetry expert (I stick to stories) I believe this poem makes a very strong impact. I like poetry that conveys a message and this one sent a good one. Nice job.

-Dhani

P.S. Even though you are a poet, would you mind reviewing my story? I love feedback and I'd love to hear the perspective of a poet. :)