Reviews for Unidentified Love
Katsurou Shimizu chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Other than a few problems with the language: "I laughed a nervous laugh" sounded awkward and could have been changed to something like "I uttered a nervous laugh", this is a good start!

The nightmare at the start could have been drawn out a little to give the reader a more horrific and visceral experience of being in one. I felt like everything flew too quickly over my head.

And this is one wakeup scene with a twist! I found myself smiling picturing an eagle with a backpack flying to school. Your narrative voice is pretty good and engaging as well :)
Hidden Eyes chapter 20 . 10/4/2012
Awesome! i loved it!

wait- no. no. noooooooooooo! dont go on hiatus! i was finally getting into the story again! please dont take too long!

keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 19 . 9/12/2012
Ooo scary ending is it a ghost scary u don't answer my reviews how come
Hidden Eyes chapter 18 . 8/2/2012
Please update! I love your story! It's so funny and awesome and interesting!
Guest chapter 18 . 8/1/2012
O romance how u make my heart go crazy heehee those girls are soooo annoying but I can imagine how fast they must have pulled out their phones took a pic and was typing goodness I would love to give all those girls a good roundhouse kick in the face awesome chapter but I need more romance between jun Toni and hikaru's brother
Guest chapter 18 . 7/23/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I read over all your chapters before you posted chapter 18 and I reviewed it after... but... IT DIDN'T GO THROUGH! TT_TT UGGGHHHH, I'll just make sure this one does for sure. I LOOOOOVE THIS. I WISH IT WAS A REAL MANGA. MWHAHAHHAHAAA I LOVE TONI'S PERSONALITY. If Himura or however you spell his name and Toni morph together. OMG. FULL OUT MINE. WELL DONEEE! _
Jay chapter 17 . 7/9/2012
I actually really like your level of detail. Because you don't drone on for a long time, your plot moves forward, which I very much enjoy. :)

Guest chapter 17 . 7/8/2012
This chapter was interesting and I liked the ending. U cant believe how many times I've checking to see if there was a new story it's better if miku gets herself into trouble keeps the story interesting
Haidynre chapter 16 . 6/13/2012
I really like your writing. A lot of storys get bogged down in little details. Its refreshing to find a story that I feel is going somewhere, and has good character development. I really like your story and I can't wait for more!
Akane EternalSnow chapter 16 . 6/11/2012
Yay I like love in stories there should be more and yes I did fairly well on my finals and I have graduated 8th grade and on vacation your story is becoming better and better so don't stop
Akane EternalSnow chapter 15 . 5/22/2012
I really like this chapter I got excited when I saw there was a new chapter but it was really hard to read this one with finals
Akane EternalSnow chapter 14 . 4/20/2012
Haha I like this chapter but I been saying that in all my reviews I think this one is the most funniest you should have more humor in your story cuz I live to laugh which is y I'm called crazy half the time cuz I laugh for no reason well thats all I have to say see in the next chapter
Akane EternalSnow chapter 13 . 4/2/2012
Yay to another great chapter but I'm wondering how bout more chapters haha take your time but don't take too long I always check to see if there is a new chapter thanks for answering all my reviews I like reading them :) :3
Akane EternalSnow chapter 12 . 3/8/2012
Yay new chapter wheeeeee :) yes it cleared everything soon I'll be putting out my story probably during the summer it's fun to review I'm going to review aaaaalllllll your chapters if that's ok with you :) see you till the next chapter
Akane EternalSnow chapter 11 . 2/14/2012
Omg I absolutely want to read the next chapter soooooo badly I like this as well I guess I like the whole story but I'm confused with the costume changes
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