Reviews for And So Then Did We
Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
You did a great job of catching the raw essence of nature and combining that with the Mother Nature concept. While reading this, I felt like I was watching one of the most natural of occurances. You have some well written lines and my favourite bit is "It's one of those silent conversations where you talk, and I touch you" The only con/crit I have for you is the last half of the last line line; I think it needs to be reworked as I feel it just doesn't seem to sit right: "And that their civilisation" it doesn't seem grammatically correct. All in all, quite an enjoyable read.
Bellanyx chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I really like the personification of Mother Nature in this piece. My favourite line has to be "I know life is just death in disguise", it's a very profound and thought-provoking statement.

Keep Writing!