Reviews for Obsession
Mrstress chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I think this has the potential to be a really strong piece, but the passion that one normally gives their so-called obsession doesn't come through with your choice of words. I like the onomatopoeia, and the repetition as though the poem is being written whilst the author is knitting, but I think that there's a little room for improvement on the lines in-between.

Keep writing!
ForThoseNotBreathing chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Hmm. This was interesting, simple, but there seems to be a lot simmering under the surface, which brings out my curiosity.