Reviews for My only hope for her presence here
AudreySM chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
What I enjoyed the most was the way it was written more than what was said. You brought my mood into it, made me feel it! Very well done.
physics223 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
I share this sentiment with you

Pining for a girl who dropped me

But even in this hellish row

I hold all my love for just she

The first line of the first stanza only has nine syllables, but the poem is quite good. It's something I've done before - I've written 60 poems for a girl I liked, but it was to no avail. The only words she'd ever hear are the words I could never tell her anymore.

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