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| TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Beautiful imagery here. I also like how when you changed it to the girls wanting the adults to do what they did, you kept the activities the same - ones that are usually considered childish - it added a real depth to this piece. Well done :)
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
oh my goodness. i'm tearing up.
i love you so much.