Reviews for A Kiss of Death
Nabo Preo chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
That was a good one there. I can usually predict the ending while reading a story but this one was totally unpredictable. Like it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
You know, this isn't my first time reading this story, but I just realized that at the beginning, it really sounds like she's pregnant.
WonderlandAsylum chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Its good :D i wasn't expecting the ending, which makes it a good thing. in the middle though there isn't much description about the dad yelling out to... the other kids? love the begining. really had me going.
ressax chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
You put this story under supernatural. So of coarse I knew what you were hinting at. But the way you wrote it was very good. You've made the reader think one thing. Then twisted the story line. I don't think you should continue. Keep this as a short story please. As much as it would be interesting have more of the story. I think that how you've ended it will leave the reader guessing. Good work!