|Reviews for The Trials Of Blood|
| Margaret Whittaker chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
It was a bit short. but other than that it was good.
| dullahan21 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Great details; you're a talented writer. Despite how many reviews you may get, I do hope you update.
| Speak Blue chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
great story. UPDATTEEE
| BNTN chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I can't really say much, to be honest, simply because at the moment I've no clue what's going on.
It's quite good so far, though, even if there are a couple typos.
I look forward to reading more.
| MyWeirdWorld chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Yes, I know, I promised to review XD
" Every time I put my paw down I hear a crunch that reminds me of a bone breaking under pressure." I like this sentence. It fits.
Eventhough it's from the thoughts of an animal, keep in mind that the sentences have to... flow. I don't know if you get what I mean, but whatever XD
And other then that... like I said, your detail skill has improved ;)