Reviews for Kenkon
Richard Omega chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
The story seems good, it caught me off guard though when it went from 3rd person to first and it confused me, it also has some grammar errors in it, nevertheless is interesting i'll keep reading :D

-Richard Omega
NothingxGoldxCanxStay chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
You have a good story here, and I like the creepiness of the ghosts. The tenses tend to get mixed up between past and present, though. You should slow down the pace of the story, and try to use a little less irony. Otherwise, it's good. I like the detail a lot.