Reviews for Cloudy Thoughts
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
So deep.. Still funny how I almost cried
Psyche chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Love how it flows so smoothly.

i really like the last four lines.. though..
A Sapphire Rose chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I love the emotion in this poem. The almost bitter but still intense feeling expressed by the imagery. Especially in this line.

"But this isn't depression, Nor is it gloom, Its just my own thoughts, Taking up room"

Brilliant work all in all.
Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Very sweet. I really like the following lines, and I think you've pretty much explained what every writer feels.

Thoughts roaming around

Doing as they please

I have no control
MyManIsFictional chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I love the title *cough cough*

This poem is really good; it flows easily and conveys so much in rhyme. It's realistic and emotional, just your style.
AmyRainbow chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Wow, never have I seen such emotion put so beautifully, this describes how a lot of us feel absolutely perfectly. Wonderful, I love it!