|Reviews for What if I was|
| wordsofjade chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Aaw this was so lovely! Such a good idea for a poem and well executed :)
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
That was such a beautiful poem and I hope that the person you directed this at understands how much they mean to you! Really beautiful and I loved the imagery in this! It sounds romantic and I love the repetition it gives the poem structure and of course some of lines rhyming makes it even better :) Nice piece
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Someone better be all those things in the futur though
Rlthey have a lot to live up to Lolz great poem :)
| Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
'What if I was your dreams
Would you make them go far'
I couldn't imagine anyone who received this poem, would be anything but touched.