Reviews for What if I was
wordsofjade chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Aaw this was so lovely! Such a good idea for a poem and well executed :)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
That was such a beautiful poem and I hope that the person you directed this at understands how much they mean to you! Really beautiful and I loved the imagery in this! It sounds romantic and I love the repetition it gives the poem structure and of course some of lines rhyming makes it even better :) Nice piece
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Beautiful poem

Someone better be all those things in the futur though

Rlthey have a lot to live up to Lolz great poem :)
Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
'What if I was your dreams

Would you make them go far'

I couldn't imagine anyone who received this poem, would be anything but touched.